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My Own Manga (Thread)

This Is My Own Manga.. It's Captured.. Not Scanned.. I'll Scan It Later When It's Finished.

Page 1: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172639/sany0050-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-451k?da=y

Page 2: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172640/sany0051-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-486k?da=y

Page 3: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172641/sany0052-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-549k?da=y

Page 4: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172642/sany0053-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-596k?da=y

Page 5: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172643/sany0054-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-628k?da=y

Page 6: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172644/sany0055-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-585k?da=y

Page 7: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172645/sany0056-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-630k?da=y

Page 8: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172646/sany0057-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-546k?da=y

Page 9: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172647/sany0058-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-612k?da=y

Page 10: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172648/sany0059-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-568k?da=y

Page 11: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172649/sany0060-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-709k?da=y

Page 12: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172650/sany0061-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-677k?da=y

Page 13: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172651/sany0062-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-788k?da=y

Page 14: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172652/sany0063-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-724k?da=y

Page 15: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172653/sany0064-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-792k?da=y

Page 16: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172654/sany0065-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-572k?da=y

Page 17: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172655/sany0066-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-599k?da=y

Page 18: http://www.keepandshare.com/doc/3172656/sany0067-jpg-october-1-2011-5-04-pm-646k?da=y

That Just 18 First Pages Of My Own Handmade Comic.. I'll Scan It If It's Done.. That Was Just A Samples.. Please Comment.. ^^

It's nice that you are doing one but I must say you won't be able to publish this.
I don't really know what your after when asking us to comment.

This will need a lot more work before you can do anything with it. But If you keep on practising I think you will become better rather quickly.

Even though it's not perfect i'm impressed that you are actually doing it. When I was your age I would always dream of making my own novel or manga but I would never actually go through with it.

Good luck!

Noodle, Thanks For Your Suggestion.. You Helped Me Very Much..
I Should Realized My Own Drawing Skill.. But, I Am Wondering How If I Publish My Own Art To Another People In The World. I Want To Make A Skatevideo Before..But, That Need A Long Time To Make It. Since That, I Want Another. So I Wondering How If I Make My Ownself Manga.. Maybe In My Mind, The Drawing Doesn't Need To Be Very Good.The Important Thing Is, People Understand The Story And What I'm Drawing.But After You Reply This Thread, I Think You're Right.Thanks Once Again,Noodle..

Don't thank me. And if you only want to get your message out I would recommend you to write a novel instead. Good luck.

I Feel Little, Boring With Writing.. i enjoyed drawing better than writing it.. ^^

wow it sucks.

Yeah, Thanks For The Comment 9mm..
Oh Yeah! It Just First-18 Page From All Over 100 Page Of This Manga! In The Middle Of The Comic, My Drawing Style Changed! I Don't Know Why, But My Friends Tell Me My New Drawing Style Is Far Better Than The Pages That I've Uploaded Here..

I am no art major, but I didn't detect any significant change in your style. Honestly, it's too shitty to even define a style. This one really sucks. But I am sure you can practice and get better at it.

I quit after the first 2 pages...:|

@GMYui It's Boring, Right?
@9mm Hey, It's True! The Body Drawing Has Been More Proportional, The Motions Are Easy To Understand, And The Page Layout Is Better! Then, Thanks For The Support,9mm..

I am sorry T_T

@GMYui You Don't Need To Sorry.. Maybe My Manga Is Really Boring.. Right?
I'll Try To Make The Story Better..^^

Typing Like This Is As Bad As 7yp1ng l13k d1$.

-@Someone173

Copying Someone Elses Post Is Just As Bad As Typing Like This

<3

@Noodle ;o; I'm sorry. There. Quoted.

I QUIT AFT3R THR33 PAG3S B3CAUS3 I R3ALLY DID NOT WANT TO DOWNLOAD AND HAV3 TH3 T3DIOUS JOB OF OP3NING 3ACH AND 3V3RY SINGL3 PAG3 WITH AMAT3URISTIC DRAWING. PERHAPS YOU COULD WORK ON DRAWING HUMANS. YOUR HUMANS AR3 QUIT3 AWKWARD WITH TH3 POSITION OF TH3R3 FAC3S AND WHATNOT.

I would advise you to first work on your technique when it comes to proportions, before trying to draw manga. We have some awesome art tutorials here, so take a look.

So, i'm sorry if i make you all disappointed. i'm not english languaged person,maybe my capitalization wrong, it's my strange habit. my left ring finger stay above the "shift" button.. then, my grammar still bad, ah i'm still bad in english so please be understandable. i have tried to talk english fluently,but this is my english.bad english.

about the manga, my work was still bad. i'm not professional, y know. but, i join this site for asking critique from peoples.so, thank you very much for comment.
i'll try harder,and i will prove it! THANK YOU EVERYONE!! ^^

nice manga, though i consider it as a draft
id post my manga up but i dont feel like it right now

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