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I want to see another amateur manga! (Thread) - Page 3

Pretty good, I can't do colors yet. I need to practice on that

@inasda, your drawing was great, if you get seriously with that, you can send it to editor and publish your comic everywhere.. :)
@kuraihikari WOW! that was great! your drawing was great! i don't know how to describe my feeling to your drawing, but that was great! :)

check this!
http://thecolorless.net/thread/544408

Man, I love reading amateur manga! I don't know why, it just seems awesome that there are people who are doing what they want to do, and showing it off! Never stop!

@Olek : okay! i'll finish my manga for you! i'll never stop! i'll do my best to continue my manga until it finished.^^
have you seen my manga yet? check in my previous thread. it was old 1-18 page. but i've changed some pages to tell the story more depth. i've posted the sample of the changed pages in the further post of that thread. (idk how to tell it, but i hope you understand). waiting for critiques.. ^^

revivals
http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/329/1/5/insada_story_by_deadmane0311-d4hbejx.jpg
http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/329/3/a/insada_story_by_deadmane0311-d4hbf1c.jpg
workin drafts

Firstly: I'd like to ... praise(?) ... you for having the patience to draw a manga. I get bored to easily and my mind wonders. I've been "working" on a fanfiction for close to a year now T_T

Secondly: To me the look of a manga, picture or anime is very important. If it doesn't look good then I'm not interested.

My point is that it's hard to please everyone. There's some that like new styles and some that looks for more quality. But know that everyone started at the bottom, work hard and your drawing skills will get better. Or make that your style and make people fall in love with it!

Just saying here but drawing and creating a story are two difficult things that would be a huge pain in the ass to do at the same time. I suggest that everyone who aspires to become a manga artist to practice storyboarding and drawing separately so your brain can focus on one aspect at a time.

Because, there's nothing more frustrating than having to do whole drawings just because the story. angle, or composition isn't quite right.

Guys check this out
http://thecolorless.net/thread/546400

It's on a hiatus right now, but still.

@Inasda : Wow, it was so nice! but, may i give you any recomendation? i guess the outline are too rough..and seems a little bit,wooden.. but, your drawings are great..:D
@Nomi : if you really enjoy that, you'll never get bored.. :)
@MrTrain : nice~ KAWAII DESU!!!

@shafnat
thanks for the recommendations, but i dont know what you mean when its wooden
i would ad more details, i kinda have ideas but somedays its hard to think.
mainly cause i just make some of it up as i go along, kinda like trying to get drawings done in one shot

wish other people would post more

@Inasda

wooden (adj.) Made or consisting of wood; pertaining to, or resembling, wood; as, a wooden box; a wooden leg; a wooden wedding.

Means that your drawing is stiff; without volume, something that I'm struggling with myself.

Nah, it is what i mean.. Thanks @eterno .. :)

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